Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Education is bedrock of our society. In this competitive world education has become a one of the basic needs of a human. A person will not get a job if he don’t have a degree. But along with its need and fees for education is rapidly increasing. There are students who want to study but can’t study because of increasing fees. For such students government should help by waiving their tuition fees. Thus I completely agree with the author that government should offer free university education who can’t afford it.
There are number of students who are experts in their field can change the world by their work but they cannot that because they can’t pay the huge amount of fees .For such students government should come forward. If such students get financial help they we may get another Albert Einstein, Steve Jobs and many more. Helping such students will not only benefits the students but also the nation which we will gain popularity in world due to the work of this students.
They are many students who are good one field but pursue another field because they cannot affords fees of the field they want to pursue. Let’s take a hypothetical situation a student who want to his career in business field and aspiring to do MBA. But he cannot afford to spend thousands of dollar on his universities fees and then he end up choosing another field whose fees is much less. For such students government should come the policy of no interest education loans. So the aspirant can take loan from the government can study.
Thus government should help the penury students who cannot afford huge amount of university fees .I think helping the poor is not only the responsibility of the government only all the rich people should help such students by helping them in any way they can. If all brilliant students of the nation gets the appropriate help than the nation will easily developed and gain fame because of their work.
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...priate help than the nation will easily developed and gain fame because of their work.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253298153034 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.155672823219 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0633245382586 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474934036939 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0633245382586 0.0444667217837 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108179419525 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.023746701847 0.0406280797675 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47923514588 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0158311345646 0.030933414821 51% => OK
Particles: 0.00263852242744 0.0016655270985 158% => OK
Determiners: 0.089709762533 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0580474934037 0.0249443105267 233% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.023746701847 0.0148568991511 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2085.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 337.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18694362018 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320474777448 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219584569733 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163204747774 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103857566766 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47923514588 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46884272997 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 47.5687436034 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8235294118 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0085240328 59.4972553346 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.647058824 141.124799967 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.21349557522 403% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.7819863851 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.44554455446 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266895176446 0.391690518653 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120116872245 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0736425572088 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480234150802 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174381466872 0.149214159877 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990256647712 0.161403998019 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724044470782 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364487459206 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0456309335203 0.0692045440612 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188670618449 0.275328986314 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516189643017 0.0653680567796 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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