It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds.
Law is the rule that every citizen of the country should follow. It has created by the government to create awareness of punishment for their wrong doings. Because of the law every citizen are scared to do any crime. I agree with author law can punish people based on the crime they have committed but it cannot change human moral behavior.
Before existence of law, in older days kings used to rule their country they were responsible for punishing their citizen of country, but there was none to punish king for his wrong doings. Hence law was created to create impartiality between citizen, in front of law all human beings are treated same there is no partiality. If there was no law existed then the world will be filled with chaos and crime.
For example a robber will be indicted for his wrong doings by the law, but after the punishment has expired he will continue his robbery, this shows that law can punish him but it cannot change his mind to stop the robbery. The people commit crime based on circumstance few happens unexpectedly and few because of prejudice. But law do not see the circumstance to punish the crime there is no second chance to any one.
There are few cases where law helped to change there heart and mind. Some people accidentally had been committed the crime because of their ego but later the contrition helps them to realize that they have committed the big mistake. If they behave well and good in their rehab there will be chances where the duration of the punishment will be reduce.
In conclusion the law has rights to punish everyone for their crime, where we cannot say that law cannot change people heart and mind there will be very rare case where due to remorse people change and start new life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s of punishment for their wrong doings. Because of the law every citizen are scared to ...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ne to punish king for his wrong doings. Hence law was created to create impartiality ...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
... the crime there is no second chance to any one. There are few cases where law helpe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63987138264 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2565796358 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3787009423 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220655599424 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922409953355 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814119388063 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155738617932 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721781325169 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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