Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws are the guidance of a nation and to guide the nation to the right course, laws should be flexible enough to reflect public consciousness and also should be strict to tackle difficult situations.
From psychological perspective, we human have some predisposition to break laws and that is why there should be enough provision for alternatives so that we are not directly compelled to break it. Moreover, If laws are too much strict and the government overexercise that power and at certain time, leaders become autocrat.
A law is made considering a situation and at certain time that situation may not exist. So, the validity of enforcing that law become obsolete over time and that is why from time to time it should be modified. For example, a few decades ago, carbon emission and environment condition were not that much worse, what that it is today. So, laws regarding carbon footprint, fossil fuel consumption were not that much stringent. But today, situation has changed, there are mass consciousness against that catastrophe and that is why world leaders are much more concerned about these issues today than before. Countries are going through more strict regulations, and laws are being modified more strictly day by day. So, from this scenario, we can say that, depending on consequence and time, laws should be flexible and sometimes need to be changed.
When a new country is born, suppose a war torn newborn country, initially there are a lots of shortcoming and adverse situations and that is why the newborn government may have less strict laws regarding varied situations so that the citizen can feel free to work together, to wake up from the initial crisis. But to succeed in the long run, the country should impose strict laws by time, so that the whole system works in order. Authority should take strict measure against rebellion. So, from this circumstances, we can say that, depending on situation laws should be flexible.
Laws should respect every culture and provide freedom to flourish them. At the same time, an act which is a norm in one culture, may be the not in another. For this, any strict system regarding any behavior, attitude should not be the nationwide standard rather persons behavioral attributes should be justified depending on the culture they live on. In India, slaughtering cow is regarded as a crime but it should not be the nationwide standard as there are some other states like Kashmir where people are Muslim. So, forbidding them from doing their rituals should not be the standard practice and that is why laws should be flexible enough depending on places.
On the contrary, situation arises when people become rebellious and thwart the development of the country. At that time, strict law should be enforced so that mass people would not be encouraged to join the turmoil to embarrass the government or impede development.
To conclude, laws should be flexible enough to change depending on situation and places, at the same time, should have optimum strictness to drive the nation to the right course.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226315789474 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.171929824561 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0947368421053 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0561403508772 0.0497285424764 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0210526315789 0.0444667217837 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0947368421053 0.12292977631 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0456140350877 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6953436366 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00175438596491 0.0016655270985 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0912280701754 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0421052631579 0.0249443105267 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019298245614 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3076.0 2732.02544248 113% => OK
No of words: 512.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0078125 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2578125 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1875 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13671875 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6953436366 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46484375 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.8604691968 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2727272727 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7282366816 59.4972553346 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 49.0539772727 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.47183098592 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336600479817 0.391690518653 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13520312737 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070297720753 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572647374021 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201069656371 0.149214159877 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13851420012 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086016544704 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385120954335 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0587989985424 0.0692045440612 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243628873933 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703299786609 0.0653680567796 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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