Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Some people believe that advantages of flexible laws are more than that of fixed laws. However, others have the opposite view. As far as, I am concerned the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account of the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that flexible law can save time. As we all know, the legislation law process is cumbersome and time-consuming. In the today’s fast change world, we have faced many situations which they are not written in the law. Moreover, a politician may spend several months to giving experts’ comments for imposing a law. In this way, Flexible law allows us to use them in similar conditions.
A further point we must consider is that most laws are suitable for certain generation and desirable, while over time can change the scenario. I think that a small example can give some light to this topic. Ten years ago in Singapore, the government imposed a law that women did not have a right to vote. Moreover, they had to use a special clothes, which is called Hijab, for going to out. At that time, people agreed with this rule, because the country comprised of a great number of religious people. However, the next generation has fewer religious beliefs and may consider this law is sex discrimination, or violation their freedom. In this way, a law can be fully functional and makes life convenient, if it can adapt with various conditions.
Apart from point I made above, under some circumstance, flexible laws can better establish the justice. Indeed, fixed laws lead to the judge condemns some culprits with the same punishment, while they do a similar crime in different situations. For instance, one who committed murder because of personal aim, like acquiring victim’s wealthy, should be punished like another man who killed because he wanted to protect of his family. So, the biggest advantage of the flexible law lies in the fact that promotes justice in the society.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that adaptable laws can save time, and also increase people’s satisfaction, expand the justice among people. Admittedly, as an English proverbs goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, under some circumstances flexible laws have negative consequences. Nevertheless, its profits outweigh dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...heless, its profits outweigh dangerous.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232456140351 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.149122807018 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100877192982 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0394736842105 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0372807017544 0.0444667217837 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111842105263 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0219298245614 0.0406280797675 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8549216512 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175438596491 0.030933414821 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0241228070175 0.0249443105267 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109649122807 0.0148568991511 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2338.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13648293963 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356955380577 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296587926509 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212598425197 0.200843997647 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128608923885 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8549216512 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 219.290929204 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603674540682 0.48968727796 123% => OK
Word variations: 72.904207939 55.4138127331 132% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5652173913 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0921179747 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.652173913 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5652173913 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.674092028746 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 46.2240100422 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.6213592233 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198159698231 0.391690518653 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.060152079954 0.123202303941 49% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0527364487199 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440531442216 0.547984918172 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0998715332596 0.149214159877 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616067459035 0.161403998019 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453505284334 0.0892212321368 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243077706277 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104351410189 0.0692045440612 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12102967532 0.275328986314 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307913193526 0.0653680567796 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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