Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws in any nation are to protect people and prevent unlawful activities. Laws are for people and these need to be flexible to certain extent to accomodate various circumstances, times and places. Sometimes people commit crimes or any illegal activity under forced conditions, not intentionally. When such situations comes, while giving punishment consider those circumstances and give some rebate in punishment.
There are crimes which happens in self defense. For example, if someone is getting robbed or beaten up by someone, and in selfdefense other person hurts or kills the robber, in this case, law need to consider that person's circumstances instead of giving strict punishment as per law.
Sometimes, people are forced to crimes by some group of bad people. In this case, if some one indulges any illegal activity and get caught by police. Then giving punishment to without considering his circumstances can't be fair. For example, if someone kidnapper kidnaps someone's child and tell them to do something unlawful, then it is still a crime but, punishment can be modified according to his circumstances.
Laws change from country to country or sometimes state to state also. If someone relocated to new country and doesn't something which was legal in his previous country and illigal in his new country, then instead of punishing them educate them or give some minor punishment may work.
On the other side, people might take advantage of flexible laws, and commit crimes and able to save themselves from punishment. In this case, judges and police need to be careful enough, so that criminals should not take advantage of flexible law.
In conclusion, as laws are for people, and there are circumstances, in which people break laws unintentionaly or forcefully, laws can be flexible for them, but make sure no one take advantage of flexible laws and commits crimes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'situations'' or 'situation's'?
Suggestion: situations'; situation's
...onditions, not intentionally. When such situations comes, while giving punishment consider...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e group of bad people. In this case, if some one indulges any illegal activity and get c...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o without considering his circumstances cant be fair. For example, if someone kidnap...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... to country or sometimes state to state also. If someone relocated to new country an...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...If someone relocated to new country and doesnt something which was legal in his previo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82000379292 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527868852459 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1337028813 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173190984446 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628140577096 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732623207936 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103696705775 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668539810848 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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