Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

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Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

Law is the principle we need follow in our daily life. Whether Law is fixed or varying according to the circumstances but following law is one's duty. Sometimes its not good to be Law fixed because we do not know on what circumstances the victim has committed the crime, so think law should not be fixed or rigid

Law is like god which we should follow and if we go against of it we have face the consequences in the future. Here is one example where law has changed based on circumstance , in chian the government infused a law stating each family should have only one child but later after the earthquake happened it changed the law stating the family can have two child.

Based on the law created people are sacred to create any crime because they will get punished based on their crime.
here one more example based on the law varying, one person commits murder based on the vengeance he had against other person but another person murdered to save his life. hence law cannot be punish both of them as same because its two different circumstance.

hence whether law is rigid or not but existence of law make lot of difference in the real world. but sometimes law should not be rigid because the innocent people will be punished or may the law was valid before but not now.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the circumstances but following law is ones duty. Sometimes its not good to be Law ...
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...llow and if we go against of it we have face the consequences in the future. Here is...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...the law stating the family can have two child. Based on the law created people ar...
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...other person murdered to save his life. hence law cannot be punish both of them as sa...
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...other person murdered to save his life. hence law cannot be punish both of them as sa...
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51502145923 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38185668936 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532188841202 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3644791818 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230752916896 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10746494306 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809873716035 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138834794612 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083006718745 0.0667264976115 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 100.480337079 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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