Leaders are created primarily by the demands that are placed upon them.
We all know leaders are the people who take a stand whenever there is some issue. I somewhat agree that leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them, but there are some cases in which this is not true. Leaders are very important for the well-being of a nation. They guide the nation for its growth. But sometimes the leaders become the hindrance for the growth. It is the job of the leader to solve the issue. For instance, to solve the refugee crisis and terrorism we need a leader.
Mahatma Gandhi came forward during British Colonisation. He became the leader by the demands of the native citizens for freedom. There were many other leaders who stepped forward for the Independence. Mahatma Gandhi fought against the Britisher's for the Independence and became on of the greatest leaders of all time. In almost every country leaders have fought against the injustice to make life's better. Abraham Lincoln was another leader who fought against slavery in America. Past have been the evidence that leaders were the reason for the change in the society. Change can be also negative, like in the case of North Korea.
In modern day, politicians are the leaders who are helping the world move forward. It is the primary job of the politician (modern day leaders) to resolve the issues of the general public. The politician is created by the people who vote for them. In a general election process, the politician tells the general public how they are going to solve the issues or demand and based on their ideas the general public elect the most favorable candidate. This process shows the politicians are fundamentally created by the demands placed on them. Hence, modern day leader is created by the demands that are placed on them.
The businessman is also leaders of the contemporary world. They are the main reasons for the improvement of the standard of living. They do build stuff which people do not demand but what they feel people would love to have in their life. These things include technology and health sector. For instance, people like Steve Jobs with the help of iPhone and Mac have improved the life of people significantly. The people never demanded this technology but they loved it and he became one of the leaders of computers.
In the end, I would like to conclude that just like a pot maker makes his pots with the help of clay, leaders are made up the demands placed on them. But there are some exceptional leaders who do what they love and become a leader of a new world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71201814059 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3850585476 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439909297052 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6135270885 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6551724138 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2068965517 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.51724137931 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316896748443 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103607099463 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117530416845 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195306991432 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796549247384 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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