Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some may argue that a lot of discoveries are brought about by luck. A discussion of luck or effort is essential since it affects the ways which people pursue their goals. However, in my stance, I do not support that the most achievements can be accomplished by chances or accidents, but by the efforts, preparation, and endurance.
First of all, most achievement and discoveries are found or performed by donating innumerous efforts and time. The researchers might study for the related knowledge for many years, and then use their knowledge to develop, discover, and solve both new things and old myths. For instance, Tomas Edison who donated largely in technology said that genius is 1 percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration. Therefore, before funding anything, many researchers already put copious efforts in the fields, which might not easily be seen by other people.
Moreover, chance favors the one with a prepared mind. In the long term preparation which might not be promising to have an expecting result, some people keep donating their efforts, do everything to make themselves better, and never give up. In other words, some people who continuous working hard until a chance merges, and then they succeed, while they might be regarded as lucky people by who ignores their long term efforts. In the other hand, if they are not prepared or do not have intricate and broad knowledge, they would not reach anything even they have abundant chances.
Admittedly, Newton discovered gravity since a hit of a falling apple. Nevertheless, if Newton did not spend time to think what makes the apple fall, it is an accident with the chance but never be seized by Newton. To illustrate, even if one wants to win a lottery, the person needs to purchase it at first, despite an important discover would be much harder than buying a lottery. If the person does not want to give something at beginning, it is hard to receive anything back.
In the conclusion, many discoveries are deemed as found by luck but ignore the real endeavors which be devoted so hardly and excessively. Those endeavors cannot be identified as luck but preparation.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In other words, some people who continuous working hard until a chance merges, and then they succeed, while they might be regarded as lucky people by who ignores their long term efforts.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and continuous
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a WH-pronoun, nominative
Suggestion: Refer to by and who
Sentence: First of all, most achievement and discoveries are found or performed by donating innumerous efforts and time.
Error: innumerous Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
The essay is not exactly right on the topic. 'accidental' here don't mean 'by luck', it is explained by the following sentence: 'it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.' We need to argue the logic connection between 'one question' to 'another answer'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: ? Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 360 350
No. of Characters: 1733 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.356 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.814 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.382 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.824 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.557 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
Some may argue that a lot of discoveries are brought a...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e long term preparation which might not be promising to have an expecting result, some peopl...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...by who ignores their long term efforts. In the other hand, if they are not prepare...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'first of all', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220588235294 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.18137254902 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0637254901961 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0735294117647 0.0497285424764 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0392156862745 0.0444667217837 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107843137255 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.046568627451 0.0406280797675 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7410910687 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220588235294 0.030933414821 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00245098039216 0.0016655270985 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.078431372549 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220588235294 0.0249443105267 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0196078431373 0.0148568991511 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2152.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 452.878318584 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97777777778 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261111111111 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183333333333 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127777777778 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7410910687 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 64.9632714737 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1764705882 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4470359984 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.588235294 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.674092028746 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 47.2875816993 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.275 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346545395954 0.391690518653 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124949094498 0.123202303941 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0939940308765 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533194679559 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152247119007 0.149214159877 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125233925722 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719011450254 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.210660294296 0.385218514788 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0714705610741 0.0692045440612 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209933132045 0.275328986314 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035469081966 0.0653680567796 54% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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