Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
"Behind every successful man there is a woman", this phrase is ubiquitous throughout the world. According to me the statement made by the author is not applicable in this generation and I completely disagree with the author's conclusion.
Decades ago the human society was a male dominated society. The men used to get all the freedom whereas the woman's freedom was always restrained. The role of women those days was just to take care of the household. They were not allowed to work or take part in any social event. In some places, they were not allowed to come out of their house. Thus in those days women were never given the opportunity to showcase her talent.
But nowadays things are completely different. Women are now given equal opportunity and are working alongside men in various fields. We now have women becoming an astronaut, an athlete, a successful businessman and also the president of a country. The world has seen women's like Margaret thatcher, Indira Gandhi who have dominated the aggressive era in the modern world. The women's like Serena Williams, Mary Kom have shown that a woman can be a competitive athlete. We now have women getting successful in every field which demands physical activity such as an army, sports etc.
Thus I completely disagree with the author's statement as though the majority of women are not physically gifted but from time to time women had overcome the physical barrier using their temperateness and willpower and have even gone past men, and have proved that they are equally suited for many tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ase is ubiquitous throughout the world. According to me the statement made by the author is not...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...tion and I completely disagree with the authors conclusion. Decades ago the human so...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...not allowed to come out of their house. Thus in those days women were never given th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ctivity such as an army, sports etc. Thus I completely disagree with the authors ...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... Thus I completely disagree with the authors statement as though the majority of wom...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'whereas', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260273972603 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.184931506849 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0650684931507 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650684931507 0.0497285424764 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0376712328767 0.0444667217837 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0993150684932 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0719178082192 0.0406280797675 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64968545909 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239726027397 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123287671233 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00342465753425 0.0249443105267 14% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00684931506849 0.0148568991511 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1568.0 2732.02544248 57% => OK
No of words: 263.0 452.878318584 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96197718631 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338403041825 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254752851711 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186311787072 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12927756654 0.132149295362 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64968545909 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.48968727796 123% => OK
Word variations: 63.6783360257 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5333333333 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7048295087 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.674092028746 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 43.0086185044 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21655107459 0.391690518653 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121785246291 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759640593372 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.508857505757 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186559638757 0.149214159877 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758252768517 0.161403998019 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937882561944 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241028774219 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390095376032 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15541159785 0.275328986314 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127697330403 0.0653680567796 195% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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