Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Both genders have played an important role in evolution of civilization. Men have been doing the heavy-lifting and seeing to it that the family sustains the resources for it's own survival, women, on the other hand have taken care of the homely requisites, taking care of the children, the home and nurturing the family as she would with her whole heart. Although they have played quite stereotypical roles, as evident in history itself, I personally think that circumscribing their roles in advent of the new age is limiting and controversial.
Let's take a practical example. Studies do not necessarily show that men are smarter than women, erudite faculties also presents itself in women. If a software-developing company were to hire solely males and not females because they think it is not a valid job for the latter, they were simply ignoring the possibility that female would've been better at the job- both in persistence and in skill. The average Joe sometimes must realize that our Joan, is as intellectual as he, if not more; This really puts away the stereotyping tendencies of the selection committee and allows them to explore more talent. It increases their pool of choices and further ameliorates their company's brain-pool.
If we take a look at the past times, we can see how effective the role of women was in occupations that only allowed gents to be the staple. Consider the MBTi Test- Meyer Briggs' Type Indicator. This personality test was developed by two women housemates namely Meyer Jung & Briggs Jung- the cause of this development because at that time, the men were at war and the society organization quickly needed to assess each woman and see to it that a suitable job is granted to her for flawless functioning of the society. Also, one must only go so far in the fields of science to see the roles being reversed- consider Marie Curie. The discoverer of the element Radium; She not only died because of her dedication to perfect Radium stability but also allowed her husband to be a part of her research. Would you rather have anyone else do that?
In perspective of clinical psychology, it is easy to see the roles of men and women in society as fixed. Asserted by the fact that most media, good or bad, occasionally tends to portray these legitimacy. However, on one hand, while you can fixate each gender it's goals for society, one cannot simply see their surrounding subjectively. Each person is an individual in itself and to expect any certainty from him is blasphemy. Would you not have men cook? Would you not consider hiring a female fire-fighter? These questions promote the idea of individuality. Every person should be able to decide their own goals them selves- and not based on societal pressures or expectations.
There may be some cases where men would be infinitely more suitable for the job- a soldier, or a female would be a better match for it- such as, a nurse. Men are naturally a stronger counterpart of our species, physically they are more capable than females who are since childhood, raised as empathetic creature of choice. But one can also argue that this is consistently based on upbringing than human nature. We may wait for the day for actual studies to show up on this one!
Conclusively, I remain stern to the idea of promoting a gender-equal ideology in all occupations except where the physicality comes as a striking issue. People should choose for their own merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2879.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 599.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80634390651 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94716853372 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67749135437 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 315.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525876460768 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 934.2 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6165171284 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.62962963 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1851851852 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96296296296 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161202430157 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424982808967 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035600445671 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844587367807 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223518591387 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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