Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Equality of gender is an agreed notion all over the world.Men and women involve in different types of jobs everyday to make their livelihood. However, due to some of the differences between both the genders in few aspects, each of them are not fit to perform many missions in the everyday life. Thus, I agree with the fact that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.
Firstly, consider an example of a mining industry which requires a laborious job. People working there must be physically fit and be immune to various diseases and threats. Generally, men perform most of the mining work, due to the above mentioned fact. According to a survey recently conducted in the mining industry in Hyderabad, about 99% of the workers are men. Widely known fact, men can withstand challenges and risks with temerity when compared to women. To substantiate this fact, there was a questionnaire given to a group of people in a mart and 85% of men agreed that they would take risks whereas only 13% of women agreed the notion. Hence, we can estimate that works involving heavy risks and danger would be performed mostly by the men only.
Secondly, consider a nursing job which is a very important job in the medical regime. More often, we can observe that there nurses are female. If we perceive deeply, we can observe that there is a reasoning behind this fact. Most of the women, by nature are usually calm and sanguine. Nursing job requires a lot of patience in order to perform the tasks. From the books of psychology, we can come to the fact that patience levels in women are far greater than men, which supports the notion that such jobs are suited mostly for women, compared to men.
In contrast, there are certain tasks, where both the genders must be given importance. Certain skills involving mental abilities, like lawyers, doctors, teachers are suitable to both the communities. Form the survey conducted based on profession in 2015 by Telangana government, there are 48% of women in lawyer profession and 53% in teaching profession, which supports the claim that there jobs can be performed by both the communities with equal importance.
Therefore, there are certain jobs which involve heavy physical work and stress, like mining and army, and predominantly, men are suited for such works. Tasks which involve patience and calmness like nursing is prevalent mostly among women communities. Nevertheless, certain jobs require equal importance of both men and women like teaching, lawyer job and doctors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96470588235 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56993961396 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3633800403 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9090909091 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3181818182 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229560422774 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741214458919 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708744645892 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141203486001 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294470509551 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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