Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
"Behind every successful man their is a women", this phrase is very well known throughout the world. According to me the statement made by the author is not applicable in this generation and i completely disagree with the author's conclusion.
Decades ago the human society was a male dominated society. The men used to get all the freedom whereas the women's freedom was always restrained. The role of women those days where just to take care of the household. They where not allowed to work or take part in any social event. In some places they where not allowed to come out of their house. Thus in those days women where never given the opportunity to showcase her talent.
But nowadays things are completely different. The women are now given equal opportunity and are working alongside men in various fields. We now have women becoming an astronaut, an athlete, an successful businessman and also the president of a country. The world have seen women's like Margaret thatcher, Indira gandhi who have dominated the aggressive era in the modern world. The women's like Serena williams, martina hingis have shown that a women can be a a competitive athlete. We now have womens getting successful in every field which demands physical activity such as army, sports etc.
Thus i completely disagree with the authors statement as from time to time womens had overcome the physical barrier and have even gone past men, this they are equally suited for tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261818181818 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.167272727273 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0690909090909 0.0880659088768 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0690909090909 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0327272727273 0.0444667217837 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0945454545455 0.12292977631 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0690909090909 0.0406280797675 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59557431323 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254545454545 0.030933414821 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.134545454545 0.0997080785238 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00363636363636 0.0249443105267 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0218181818182 0.0148568991511 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1529.0 2732.02544248 56% => OK
No of words: 247.0 452.878318584 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19028340081 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344129554656 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251012145749 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178137651822 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121457489879 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59557431323 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.48968727796 122% => OK
Word variations: 61.2026732395 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4666666667 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5967539094 59.4972553346 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.5678812416 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.58108108108 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175396557181 0.391690518653 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121708643127 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0716429324595 0.077325440228 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518008253258 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184761196855 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679276196077 0.161403998019 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595751107718 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.231331293495 0.385218514788 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00993852319147 0.0692045440612 14% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122152073531 0.275328986314 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529122708299 0.0653680567796 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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