A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The author states here that nation should have same curriculum for their all students untill they reach college. Indisputably, in many developing nation there are different type of languages and cultures are involved, so same curriculum will be difficult for the students to adopt. Nevertheless, same curriculum will ensure that all the students will learn specific type of skills, that will help them and the nation for better progress. Thus, generally I agree with the statement that there should be one national curriculum for all the students across the nation.
First of all, national curriculum is essential for any nation to make sure that future men power of nation learn specific type of basic skill. This basic type of skills will be helpful for the students to be equal at the national level. Sometimes, students in urban area are very advanced to the technology around all over the world. But, in the rural area sometimes they did not get the facility to be juxtapose with all the technology and new innovations. This is the main fundamental problem faced by most of the developing countries. Same national curriculum will ensure that regional discrimination will not be any obstacle for the students.
Secondly, while creating national curriculum, nation must consider cultural inequality,too. In many developing countries, there are more than one language is spoken in nation. Different culture and different language could be obstruct for the national curriculum's implications. But, there should be adoption for different region to do changes according to their regional and cultural similarities. There are also possibilities that there is no arability of basic tools that are required for any subject. So, to find the solutions of very different problems is the basic key to achieve success for creating national curriculum.
Moreover, specific skills ensure that student get the basic skills and thinking required them to be equal with the fast changing digital era. And there should be adoption for certain elective subject. Apart from this students have penchant for sports and other curriculum activity. So, curriculum must include this facilities for elective subject that will ensure students that they are learning the required skills to be better citizen of the country.
In sum, Specific set of skills must needed for each and every nation to ensure that theirs future and their progress will be in best hands. As long as, some measures are included in the national curriculum to ensure that all the national discrimination will not affect any student to learn specif basic skills he/she will required to be par with national standards, this same national curriculum is must required for better progress of every nation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'apart from', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226141078838 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.149377593361 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.132780082988 0.0880659088768 151% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0435684647303 0.0497285424764 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0186721991701 0.0444667217837 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120331950207 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0394190871369 0.0406280797675 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70222494032 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311203319502 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933609958506 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0414937759336 0.0249443105267 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00622406639004 0.0148568991511 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2755.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 440.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26136363636 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295454545455 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.256818181818 0.200843997647 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122727272727 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70222494032 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418181818182 0.48968727796 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.4705426036 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6406924519 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.227272727 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.674092028746 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 49.5454545455 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.82352941176 1.64882698954 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358332067673 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138477982701 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0824602555046 0.077325440228 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534333405681 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140054475341 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152508135552 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865574541297 0.0892212321368 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422572246474 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100703526926 0.0692045440612 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262270532252 0.275328986314 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877472094463 0.0653680567796 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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