As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'peoples the worst'.
Suggestion: peoples the worst
...hone, technology seems to support young peoples worst tendencies to follow the crowd. Indeed,...
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Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...s essay, it seems clear that technology hasnt impaired our thinking and problem-solvi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, while, after all, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84031413613 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21280558602 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667539267016 0.4932671777 135% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 172.469864517 60.3974514979 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.916666667 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100781804628 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412427041109 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314438927348 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608014768444 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179879254334 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 48.8420337079 47% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.1639044944 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.38706741573 132% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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