People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

The statement that the decisions made by people based on emotions and giving justification for the decision makes people poor decision makers is quite controversial issue. As, there might be few issues in which you would have to take decisions instantaneously and its your choice either you take them logically or emotionally. I, do agree with the statement asserted by the author that there are decisions which when taken emotionally might hurt the person image and confronting him to be a poor decision maker.

Primarily, in daily life you have to take various decisions which are tough enough to take but if not taken at the proper time may affect you or the people around you as well. For example, if the selection for the tournament of cricket is going on and if the captain takes the decision based on his emotions that is he don't take a particular player in the team although, he is performing well only because they had a fight and exchange of bad words in the last game due to catch dropped. This particularly would be a bad decision taken by the captain emotionally as this would just affect the performance of team and the captain would be bound by controversies and be considered as a poor decision maker.

Emotions play an quite an important role in decision making. Other example being if there is a person who is found with a girl of high class family doing something by the family of the girl, he would probably be murdered if the family takes the decision of killing him emotionally without listening to the person. As, it could be possible that they loved each other and were in relationship. But, the decision taken by family emotionally to save their image in the society might just lead to a life of a person and the justification to the case won't be positive.

So to sum up I would say that there are various decisions which we need to take properly and not on the basis of emotions which are going on in our mind.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: don't
...cision based on his emotions that is he dont take a particular player in the team al...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...a poor decision maker. Emotions play an quite an important role in decision mak...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207084468665 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.177111716621 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0599455040872 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0626702997275 0.0497285424764 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0599455040872 0.0444667217837 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.133514986376 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0572207084469 0.0406280797675 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64240974069 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299727520436 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00272479564033 0.0016655270985 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.111716621253 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0299727520436 0.0249443105267 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0217983651226 0.0148568991511 147% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1943.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 348.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.264367816092 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192528735632 0.280924506359 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155172413793 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0948275862069 0.132149295362 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64240974069 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471264367816 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.3897100137 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 31.6363636364 23.380412469 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4076043482 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.636363636 141.124799967 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 23.380412469 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 50.8892371996 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.32727272727 1.64882698954 80% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165598882951 0.391690518653 42% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100516764317 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0687792795514 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607650231179 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.22187663175 0.149214159877 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910073121081 0.161403998019 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702152584248 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413033372077 0.385218514788 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.153583748869 0.0692045440612 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140279768188 0.275328986314 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703831165516 0.0653680567796 108% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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