The statement linking with people’s behavior seems like to present a common thing that people cannot control their own behavior, that will be a disaster to social. Lacking of responsibility to study leads to students not to learn seriously which makes them learning nothing that should be useful for them and cannot communicate with others students about subjects. Lacking of responsibility to work induces workers absent in days, make lowly efficiency working and even make big mistakes while working because of their behavior. Lacking of responsibility to family results that they damage family rules, fight with parents and don’t take care of others in the family.
On the other hand to the first paragraph, if everyone has a responsibility to his’ or hers’ behavior, humankind will have a big progress. Social depends on everyone’s duty to establish a system of punishment that defines a clearly personal conduct. So that, social will be stable. Meanwhile, reliably between people will be remote. Students know how to be responsibility to his or hers behavior and study useful knowledge hardly. Workers are never absent in days because they know they have to be responsibility to their behavior and do job well. Besides, children never fight with parents, understand their parents’ good intentions and take care of others in the family well especially when they are sick.
There are two reasons to produce a good behavior. The internal reason comes firstly. Family education is the earnest one that children studies. What father said and how mother to do influences every child that induces people how to think about others and how to communicate with others. Family education determines people how to treat the world and value. School education expands people visionary to the word that tells people what the word will be. The second reason is outside that usually represents rules in the working, the social laws or maybe enemy. A company makes a rule that every one should wear suits in workday that is a limited behavior. Laws regulate people’s behavior not to be a thief or a murder. If you did, you would be punished. Obeying orders is a job for solider. They obey every rule in battle, in job even in dailylife.
People’s behavior is not determined by forces or of their own making, which is a complicate result that composes of many reasons. However, it is more than a freedom choice. People should make a wisdom decision based on his status, positions and identify.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hile working because of their behavior. Lacking of responsibility to family results tha...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big progress'.
Suggestion: big progress
...ers' behavior, humankind will have a big progress. Social depends on everyone's duty...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ers behavior and study useful knowledge hardly. Workers are never absent in days becau...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...forces or of their own making, which is a complicate result that composes of many reasons. H...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edom choice. People should make a wisdom decision based on his status, positions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12590799031 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79852245344 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506053268765 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7899889091 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4230769231 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8846153846 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26923076923 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258227961566 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668869453132 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661784222068 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164317424978 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391386443427 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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