People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People’s behavior plays a fundamental role towards society. People only think, what the bad people want to think. They do the brainwash to these people and set their own wishes and hence they spread badness. I agree, the people get forced to make agree on their opinion, thinks bad and at last trouble by awful crowd.
In the name of religion, race they do the mind wash to other people. As we know, the bad people create the conflict throughout the globe, their only job to distress and spread badness . Moreover, some awful people in politics spread what they want to, their action against the peace, hence threatening the people, produce voilence in public. As a result, the situation becomes worst, many people lose their life. This all happens because some forces to make them think like that way. Apparently, this effect on illiterate public first, they comes in their talk easily and thinks as they want.
Every nation is powerful in their own way but some people spread negative thoughts to others. They thinks our country is more superior than any other country across the world, set the others brain as we are more superior and in result public fight between others, get threatened and become voilent against other country or society.
Several regions have their own colonization and lives in their colonization. Some bad people do the mind wash so that no one can thinks to go away from this crowd, even some of their mind was make since from childhood days. If some wants to go other side, they become threatned by their society. Therefore, many of them get voilent and become war that will watch by several news channel on television.
In the contrary, the government should make strict laws against these conflicts or wars. One should obey rules, so that the crime does not increase in our country. Although, our public lives in love and peace, patrotism is a good moral characterstics of our society but if someone gets effected by this, that would unacceptable.
In the nutshell, we all wants to live in love and peace but some awful people changes the behaviour by do brainwash to society. These inobedient people spread bad talks and set the mind of other as they want. However, everyone is talking about the matter and hence forcefully think, that will be correct. The government should pass strict laws and decrease the crime rate in our country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t the bad people want to think. They do the brainwash to these people and set their own wishe...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... only job to distress and spread badness . Moreover, some awful people in politics...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...effect on illiterate public first, they comes in their talk easily and thinks as they...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...pread negative thoughts to others. They thinks our country is more superior than any o...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...s to others. They thinks our country is more superior than any other country across the world, set...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ple do the mind wash so that no one can thinks to go away from this crowd, even some o...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: MAKE_SINCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sense'?
Suggestion: sense
...crowd, even some of their mind was make since from childhood days. If some wants to g...
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Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some news'.
Suggestion: some news
...ilent and become war that will watch by several news channel on television. In the contr...
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Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...nacceptable. In the nutshell, we all wants to live in love and peace but some awfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, even so, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35404966967 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502450980392 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9080762128 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0869565217 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900064319211 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344022934374 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317244238671 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538513000553 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414140713866 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.