Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.

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Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.

Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.

The young generations are the future of society and and help it to build better. Society should discern the children with special talents to grow them in that particular field. If it can be recognized at early stage, talent can be helpful to florid the child in future. The talent is skill that comes in a person from the childhood. It is considered as a gift of god. We can not be assured about the success of a talented person, but working on the talented field can result the sure shot of success. There are many examples in the world where people having special talent have wasted their life, either because of lack of guidance or provided no attention to that field. Society needs special talents to be recognized, which will eventually be a profitable account for the society itself. The talented people require essential training to burgeon their career in that field.

Talent is a catalyst of a successful journey, which requires ample amount of hardwork. In order to achieve the required hard work training, Society should provide the essential infrastructure and all financial help to the person from the starting. The step can be an encouragement not only for the that person but also for the other members of the society. In India, Sachin Tendulker is worshiped as the god of cricket. He has proved his mettle of batting to the world in the past 20 years of his successful journey. His talent was recognized by his coach, Amre, at the age of 9. He was prepared in a manner to be a successful batsman in cricket. There were few more students attended at the same time, who were superior than Sachin, but because of concentration and hardwork, they ended up in different career and not half successful as Sachin. The highlighted point indicates that the talent is not the only thing which can bring success, the training is also required. Society should work on training centers to scout the talent and flourish them.

The badminton player Saina Nehwal is also one of the example fits here to bolster the concept of the idea. She is a young badminton player, currently ranks 5 in the world rankings of the female badminton rankings. Cricket is considered as the most important sport in India, which can provide the successful career as well as money for a person. His father wanted her to be a badminton player and felt the fervidness in her for the badminton. Against the dogmatic view of society, she received her badminton training at age of 7, worked hard to become number 1 player of India, won major international tournaments and got the recognition from the world for her talent. She has inspired millions of youngsters to follow badminton or any other sport of their choice, which helped society for the hunting the new talents.

Society is full of talents around the corner, we need to identify them at earliest stage. It should not be wasted out because of lack of guidance or infrastructure. The early stage training will be helpful for the children to choose their career wisely and in a prudence manner. The results of failure will be less in society, there will be prosperity and happiness and people will have the mentality to pay back the society which has helped to become successful by all means. The ending note will be an affirmation to the idea for providing the training to young guns of special talents at the early age.

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Average: 4.1 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
...g generations are the future of society and and help it to build better. Society should...
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Suggestion: in the future
...lent can be helpful to florid the child in future. The talent is skill that comes in a pe...
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Suggestion: to
...ded at the same time, who were superior than Sachin, but because of concentration an...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lped to become successful by all means. The ending note will be an affirmation to t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.14696969697 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287878787879 0.0497285424764 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469696969697 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125757575758 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0318181818182 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57402471832 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00454545454545 0.0016655270985 273% => OK
Determiners: 0.118181818182 0.0997080785238 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272727272727 0.0249443105267 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151515151515 0.0148568991511 102% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3501.0 2732.02544248 128% => OK
No of words: 608.0 452.878318584 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75822368421 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.58838876751 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365131578947 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263157894737 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162828947368 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0888157894737 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57402471832 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 219.290929204 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440789473684 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.3007096708 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6129032258 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5037046756 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.935483871 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6129032258 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.193548387097 0.674092028746 29% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 45.9286926995 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.82993197279 1.64882698954 111% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249100596126 0.391690518653 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103041585414 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0863197074308 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518427096238 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161583193838 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115427374166 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179050217711 0.0892212321368 201% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.47634794484 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.176041700039 0.0692045440612 254% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333798203072 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.338221732088 0.0653680567796 517% => Less connections among paragraphs

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 10.4325221239 249% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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