Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Education today is not only considered as a way of learning but also as a symbol of status and as a means to keep up with the society, which made it essential for every person to take education as a choise or by force. Development of technology made lives easy but improving technology is complex and difficult, This made education to support technology. Every one who want to find a work related to technology or work dependant on technology are expected to be educated and certified. In contrast every one started to think that Education that has a scope to find job would support living and give a good status in society. This kind of education has dual advantage as it provides knowledge and also supports living.
Unemployment and lack of quality jobs are two reasons which make getting jobs difficult. So individuals opt various methods to find a easy and fruitful way to find a job, in most of the cases it is education which short circuits this process. Jobs related to technology are the majority in the total job market, Which indirectly states that learning technology can improve the chanse of getting jobs. Every job this days require a specific course as a prerequistic, Even a cleaner this days is educated to do his work effectively, he should have knowledge about bacteria and how to clean various places. So grabing a education certificate is assending a step to getting a job.
Lack of chances in other fields makes youth to think of education as a means to succed in life. This is true in countries like india, a indian youth does not have fair facilities and guidance in fields such as sports and art, which reflects less number in participation and lack of interest to opt a career in these fields. Individuals who opt such fields are certain to face troubles. So students in such countries need to focus on education than other fields of interest.
Choosing a field of interest does not always support living. It is best to consider education which provides good salary and life, but droping interest is not suggested students should consider their interest in music, art and other activities after the school. This approach balances life if a failure occures in the field of interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...nd a work related to technology or work dependant on technology are expected to be educat...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...pected to be educated and certified. In contrast every one started to think that Educati...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...individuals opt various methods to find a easy and fruitful way to find a job, in...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e the chanse of getting jobs. Every job this days require a specific course as a pre...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ourse as a prerequistic, Even a cleaner this days is educated to do his work effecti...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...how to clean various places. So grabing a education certificate is assending a st...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... This is true in countries like india, a indian youth does not have fair facilit...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'in contrast', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287804878049 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.180487804878 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707317073171 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0317073170732 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0170731707317 0.0444667217837 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114634146341 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0487804878049 0.0406280797675 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69991818041 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487804878049 0.030933414821 158% => OK
Particles: 0.00243902439024 0.0016655270985 146% => OK
Determiners: 0.0975609756098 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00975609756098 0.0249443105267 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0219512195122 0.0148568991511 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2219.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 383.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79373368146 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339425587467 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274151436031 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195822454308 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117493472585 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69991818041 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488250652742 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 52.2659522899 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5294117647 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7144838273 59.4972553346 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.529411765 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 49.9445553678 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.96808510638 1.64882698954 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217291599567 0.391690518653 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133219556345 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0734964935304 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537715222135 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123867712455 0.149214159877 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094832786389 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564635593485 0.0892212321368 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.340687721672 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0635166695835 0.0692045440612 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158893792355 0.275328986314 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447445102473 0.0653680567796 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.