Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
There are more factors effects the choosing college students field of study. Some of them are money, interest, family background, opportunities, parent’s opinions, knowledge, capacity of student and society impact. Mainly money changes the interests of college students’ field of study. If the person is not required to earn money well in future and his parents can effort more money for studies then those people can consider their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Otherwise the college students should base their choice of field of study on availability of job.
For example, Poor student parents cannot effect money for costly courses like medicine and masters.In this situation, the student should change his interest and has to choose the study based on availability of jobs in that field. In other situations like family background impacted the student study field like politician children will have plan of being politician in future and in this case the study field is based on his interest.
Looking into big picture, Even though people has interest in one field but most of the people want to settle in the secure, tensionless jobs like government jobs and some other wants to do adventurous jobs like pilot, military jobs. Some of them their study field is different for their job because of economic situations .some have aim of developing business field. There are more fields of study and more opportunities to choose the study field.
Mainly Parents should not force their opinions on students field of study.it effects the future of the students. Parents has to give choices, opportunities to students to choose their own study of field.
Finally, based on the above factors some of them believe that college students can choose their own study field and some other cases they can choose based on the opportunities of jobs in the particular field
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, then, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18064516129 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59047322102 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445161290323 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2457523507 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.639405504662 0.243740707755 262% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286946890201 0.0831039109588 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123899412907 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397163507684 0.150359130593 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835469135084 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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