As the good old cliche goes, "when you are in Rome, do as the Romans do," it is understood that the Romans can be expected to behave in a manner that is represented by the city of Rome. These words imply that city of Rome reflects the characteristics of Roman Society. Is it true in the present modern world? The answer is ambiguous because Rome now consists of people from various different religions which consists of different societies. These people migrated due to various factors like better opportunities of jobs and many more. Thus it is now difficult to study the most important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities.
On the contrary, these characteristics could be better understood by studying its villages and smaller cities as these characteristics are still preserved in these areas. In the past, the major cities of any civilization or society were the economic, cultural and political centers of that particular society. These cities reflected the true characteristics of the society that they were a part of. However, due to rapid developments across the globe, now most of the major cities of the world are almost the same. This is because there has been an intermingling of various societies with people traveling far and wide in search of careers and better homes. Any major city of the world would now consist of people who may have varied origins.
Can a study of Paris help in understanding the true characteristics of the French society? The answer to this question would probably be a "No". This is because by virtue of being the fashion hub of the world, Paris now the home of designers, fashion models, garment manufacturers who have their roots in some other country. Therefore, a study of Paris cannot be relied upon for giving accurate information about the French society.Moreover, over the years, there would have been inter-race marriages leading to a new generation that does not carry the traits of the societies of either of its parents. On the contrary, small towns and villages situated in the countryside of France will give you an idea of the characteristics of the French society as these townships would be consisting of French people who have been able to retain their traditions through the generations.
In sum, it is definitely true that a study of the major cities of any society helps in understanding the characteristics of the society. However, this may not necessarily be true in the modern world where the characteristics of a society are probably limited to its rural areas.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229613733906 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.1330472103 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113733905579 0.0880659088768 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407725321888 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0278969957082 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.154506437768 0.12292977631 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0407725321888 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99946112239 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0171673819742 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.145922746781 0.0997080785238 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236051502146 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0171673819742 0.0148568991511 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2552.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 429.0 452.878318584 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94871794872 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337995337995 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2331002331 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172494172494 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11655011655 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99946112239 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452214452214 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 49.2656188171 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5789473684 23.380412469 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1474433033 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.315789474 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 23.380412469 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 45.8889706784 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.10638297872 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467600934577 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13360925098 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0890966065187 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.586794254439 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164574836853 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218052004508 0.161403998019 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893912558189 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.616772089866 0.385218514788 160% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0189973714766 0.0692045440612 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371503378697 0.275328986314 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115522339875 0.0653680567796 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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