TO UNDERSTAND THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARACTERISTICS OF A SOCIETY, ONE MUST STUDY ITS MAJOR CITIES.
From the dawn of the civilization, the society, its moral , arts , attributes all have been linked with their major cities.
Throughout the history we have seen many rise and falls of civilization and their societies; and many of the information about
how they were , how they thought and their peculiraities can be attributed to their works on their major cities.
So it is reasonable to state that major cities are pivotal to understand about imnportant characterstics of any society.
Societies often defined as the group of social individuals , how they co-exist with their morals and arts is often a
fascinating subject of study. As we have evolved through time it has ever been more important to understand the most
important aspects of our society both of the past and the present.
one major way to do so is study about their major cities because more often or nor that is the place we are going to
find our treasures. Many historic cities have been built in historic times by then prevailaing socities. For instance, we
can take Rome for and an example. Rome alone can strip out the major information about the Roman civilization.
The Roman societies were known for their skills in arts and wars which is reflected by Rome. The famous monuments , sculptures,
And even the dresses tells a lot about their technological prowess and how ahead they were of their time. Similarly the
famous arenas shows their predeliction towards warfares. And the famous quote "Rome was not built in a day" explains the persistancy
towards excellence of the roman societes.
Similar is the case of Famous Athens city of Greek societis Spartans as they called themselves. They were known for their
famous gods like Zeus, Thor which is demonstrated by the big and well reverd statues of them in the heart of Athens. They were
diplomatic , ahead in politics all of which can be traced from their famous cities.
This is not the case of mere past. It is prevalent in the todays world and societies. The Kathmandu valley which is major
inhabitants of Newars . Major information about the Newar society is enlighted by the valley itself. The famous temples built
in Newari sytle, The famous newari songs that is still heard in kathmandu city. The famous Newari khaja. Every bits and
pieces in Kathmandu valley reflects thousands of information about the newari society. And so will be the case in future.
The major cities will continue to cast lights on their societies.
However, sometimes what we see in the major cities are just the mirage of the society. They do not represent the whole socity
but merely the rich and the well off ones. Pyramids of gaza is one of such example. Egypt society as a whole seems so well
ahead in terms of development and eqaulaity seems to be the case , but in real scenario, Egypt was a society ruined by
slavery and discrimination.
In a nut shell, we can justify that major cities indeed gives some major information about the prevalent societes as in
case of Rome, Paris and many other famous cities. But we cannot rule out the case as sometimes the major city could not even
be 1 percent of what the society is or was.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241666666667 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.14 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0883333333333 0.0880659088768 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0633333333333 0.0444667217837 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.13 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59083496766 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0133333333333 0.030933414821 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00166666666667 0.0016655270985 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.0966666666667 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183333333333 0.0148568991511 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3193.0 2732.02544248 117% => OK
No of words: 552.0 452.878318584 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78442028986 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.282608695652 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199275362319 0.280924506359 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143115942029 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108695652174 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59083496766 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 219.290929204 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44384057971 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.1653612482 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8064516129 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7385302284 59.4972553346 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8064516129 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.290322580645 0.674092028746 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.94800884956 586% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 22.0 5.21349557522 422% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.7339878448 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.56774193548 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354204691437 0.391690518653 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121825991775 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0844399862927 0.077325440228 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.700801160588 0.547984918172 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.262788639689 0.149214159877 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129392889608 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781238757171 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.152041208354 0.385218514788 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0905368095359 0.0692045440612 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13653398125 0.275328986314 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770201806036 0.0653680567796 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.88274336283 430% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 14.0 2.70907079646 517% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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