To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The study of major cities of a society to comprehend the most important characteristics might seem valid because the major cities of a society might give the glimpse of the entire society. It might seeem that a country is driven by its major cities.
In this modern world of globalization, people migrate across the world, usually to the major cities of a society. So, the major cities these days, have global elements. The major cities give the glimpse of the degree of acceptance of global elements to the society and these ciites keep renovating themeseleves to cater the needs of these global elements. Consider the example of the capital of Indian society, New Delhi. This city scales from the poors to the richest people of the Indian society, displays core Indian food to variety of global cuisines, showcases a variety of clothings- from the traditional lenhengas to jeans and skirts, has a variety of markets from Chandni Chowk, which has a myriad of shops on claustophobic streets to the biggest mall of Asia.
Also, the fact that major citites serve an improtant role in a society can't simply be overlooked. These major cities provide a global outlook to the citizens of society. Also, the trends in the major citites dominate the entire society. Reconsider the example of Mumbai. The entire Indian film industry and tv industry which is based in this city is leaves trils for a majority of the population of the Indian society.
On the other hand, consider the financial captial city of India, Mumbai. To understand the economy of India, one might be tempted to explore Mumbai, but the fact is that Indian society heavily relies on agriculture for its revenue and therefore, to understand the economic characteristics of the Indian society, exploring a village is a far better option albiet Mumbai or any other major city.
The major citites give an overall understanding of a society due to globalization. But to escape the chances of elude comprehension, the interior cities of the society should also be explored.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277333333333 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.112 0.157235817809 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12 0.0880659088768 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0266666666667 0.0497285424764 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.008 0.0444667217837 18% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.122666666667 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0186666666667 0.0406280797675 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72476787188 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373333333333 0.030933414821 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.165333333333 0.0997080785238 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133333333333 0.0249443105267 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00533333333333 0.0148568991511 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2051.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 341.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0146627566 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404692082111 0.366273622748 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269794721408 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143695014663 0.200843997647 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0879765395894 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72476787188 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463343108504 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.0665908793 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3125 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.6553949506 59.4972553346 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1875 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 48.2919721408 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.85454545455 1.64882698954 173% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522500073021 0.391690518653 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146393688314 0.123202303941 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0968438125649 0.077325440228 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.662275202066 0.547984918172 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17378233354 0.149214159877 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239299881006 0.161403998019 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107557373916 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.514985518745 0.385218514788 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0766363928264 0.0692045440612 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372067547891 0.275328986314 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831891755013 0.0653680567796 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.