To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Studying major city of any country gives a complete overview of its society. However, some characterstics are prone to change. If one needs to have an overview of the society it would be a good idea to start with major city. But, for a much detailed and correct analysis, peeking through major city is of little to no help.
Major cities generally experience people from multiple diffrent ethnecities, maybe because of the job opportunities it provides or a better living enviornment. These people carry with them their vareigated culture, traditions, tastes and delicaces to the major cities. Mumbai (finance capital of India), inhabits people from various diffrent part of India. People turn towards mumbai for job. One may see west bengali's, Rajasthani's, People from north india living together. One can even see sweets distributed during diwali. Hindu's congratulating Muslim's brothers on eid. Thus, a positive quality of brotherhood can be seen if one visit Mumbai.
However, major cities has numerous diffrent culture and it becomes difficult to contemplate its vastness and variety, in its pure form. It is highly probable that one might miss out few good characteristics of the society when answering to these multifarious ethnic culture. One might also, pick away a negative traits as a chractersitic which might be too minute to even comprehend for its inhabitant. Furthur, People travelling to major cities tend to loose their roots from the places of their origin. Generations after generations people tend to pick up chracteristic that is native to where they live at present not where they originally belong to. Thus, analysing only major cities would not give a overall important chracteristic of the society specially when we look at a country like India. With its vast diversity, and huge landmass it becomes difficult to study social traits only by looking at major cities.
To sum it up, major cities might be a good way to start looking into important characteristics of the society. As major cities tends to host a vast number of people from a diverse population sharing the same space. However, traits changes on the basis of traditions of host city rendering it incompatible for a complete overview of the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241975308642 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.130864197531 0.157235817809 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128395061728 0.0880659088768 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0469135802469 0.0497285424764 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469135802469 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113580246914 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0320987654321 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84925711216 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041975308642 0.030933414821 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00987654320988 0.0016655270985 593% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716049382716 0.0997080785238 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222222222222 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148148148148 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2241.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1397260274 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386301369863 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279452054795 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194520547945 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112328767123 0.132149295362 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84925711216 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556164383562 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 62.2340095191 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5909090909 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9528903734 59.4972553346 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.863636364 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 44.5361145704 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.72527472527 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444557678563 0.391690518653 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0807145509223 0.123202303941 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0567776872093 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444383889462 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137317641092 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139306698713 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887361360792 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275488828913 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0893615950339 0.0692045440612 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304107568099 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081004437591 0.0653680567796 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.