To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is formed by the people residing in cities as well as in rural areas. It would be unjust to say, that only major cities can shed light on the important characteristics of a society. Due to globalization, all major cities in the world have almost become the same. In fact, studying villages and small towns might give a deeper insight into the societal characteristics. Hence, I stand against the assertion of studying major cities in order to comprehend the important characteristics of a society.
World has come closer due to advancements in the field of technology. People have traveled far and wide in search of better careers and lives. Folks from varied societies and cultures are concentrated in the mega cities. It is, therefore difficult to study the characteristics of a particular society at a place, where many societies have amalgamated. Be it Paris, London, or New York, studying only these major cities will give an incomplete knowledge of French, English, or American society, as it is impossible to segregate people based on their ethnicity.
A society's deep rooted traditions are still found in the rural areas where most of the people belong to the same race. Culture is not only preserved, but religiously followed. It is in villages, where one can dig out the core occupations of a society. In a country like India, where almost 70% of the population resides in rural areas, one can get to know everything about the society by studying those villages.
Conversely, I do agree, that some of the aspects of a society could only be known by studying its major cities. For example, political backdrop is mainly set in the cities where parliaments are present to tackle the problems faced by a society. Coming to he educational front, reputed universities ans schools have their presence in big cities. In that way, intelligence factor of a society can also be decoded mostly in the cities.
To recapitulate, considering the present day world, studying only major cities might keep us oblivious to some important aspects of a society that can not be understood without analyzing the people in rural areas. Society as a whole, is a blend of people residing in villages and cities. Snubbing one, would never give a clear picture of any society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'universities'' or 'university's'?
Suggestion: universities'; university's
...Coming to he educational front, reputed universities ans schools have their presence in big ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in fact', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240093240093 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0955710955711 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048951048951 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027972027972 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123543123543 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0606060606061 0.0406280797675 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90368894698 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027972027972 0.030933414821 90% => OK
Particles: 0.002331002331 0.0016655270985 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.104895104895 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025641025641 0.0249443105267 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013986013986 0.0148568991511 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2274.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 382.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95287958115 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371727748691 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261780104712 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185863874346 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115183246073 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90368894698 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520942408377 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 57.1262936984 55.4138127331 103% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1904761905 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6859012767 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 44.3684866617 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.83838383838 1.64882698954 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427694787069 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0923302262041 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592542583646 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524121887507 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136069353527 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178647822869 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806096484856 0.0892212321368 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.400997844463 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0535400276646 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311139836669 0.275328986314 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514642336583 0.0653680567796 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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