To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society plays a fundamental role in our life. Every single person makes a society. Nobody wants to live in isolation, he needs some group of people around him. Every group or society have some moral values, this resides every corner of the world. Throughout the globe, every country has their own culture, traditions, ritual, religious values. In my opinion, if you have to observe characteristic of a society, one should study its metropolitan cities.
In major cities, you can taste different variety of traditional food from many vendors. Even many tourists come and try various kind of dishes. Along with that, they also enjoy another type of foods. New york city is the example of diversity. There are many immigrants came from Asia, China, Russia, Mexico, Pakistan, Bangladesh, German that accumulate in one city.
There are also many colleges and universities in metropolitan cities. The universities have multicultural students across the world. They stay in hostels and know different languages, their traditions, rituals and much more. Students participate in college cultural programs and represent their culture by dancing, singing etc. However, in small cities, they do not have multifarious students either. In addition, the university is not in a position to give fund to students and organize the cultural functions.
If you have to observe the proper old traditions then one have to go to small cities or towns. There are many farming traditions that follow in a countryside. Like in India, when a farmer buys a tractor, they wrap red thread and pray in front of the vehicle. They also make some sweet dish in a home and also distribute to neighbors. Apparently, these small traditions you can look at small villages. On the other hand, people are much religious than major cities, they follow proper rituals which came from our ancestors.
A person should understand the society in metropolitan cities, there are multifarious people which follow different traditions, culture, food etc. They lived in the same city and hence they know each other’s moral values. If we look at Farming cultures, rituals, religion etc then one should observe in small villages instead of major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72652494601 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 27.1289927664 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8846153846 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7307692308 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.34615384615 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14758164593 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379065177716 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585929531717 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809666860219 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281557744837 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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