Advances in technology have meant that machines are increasingly used to do jobs that were previously done by humans The benefits far outweigh the disadvantages To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Advances in technology have meant that machines are increasingly used to do jobs that were previously done by humans. The benefits far outweigh the disadvantages.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We are living in the world of fast-paced development, where the new and more advanced inventions are being created. In fact, sometimes these inventions have some negative impact on people’s life. I completely agree that there are more advantages than disadvantages.

To begin with, some advantages of advanced technology. It is obvious that the advanced technologies make our life become easier and everything can be done instantly. For example, in the past, people used to send letter by post, which took a few days to get the reply. Nowadays, people send and receive the messages immediately by using email and the Internet. My second point is by using modern technology we can save a huge amount of time and energy. For instance, when a staff that is sent to go to another company, he just jumps in his car and in a few hours, he will reach the company. Moreover, almost all factories are using machines for producing their products. By using the machines, they will produce faster and avoid making mistake during the production.

On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of modern technology, which means that people are becoming less active. It may increase the number of obese. In addition, if the company only using the machines, people might lose their jobs. But for those people who want to do these jobs, they need to be trained which leads them to more jobs in education and people will have more highly specialized careers.

To conclude, although technology has been used to help people to finish some activities such as jobs, we should not let our body become less healthy and active.

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