the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community
These days, almost people in big cities has different characteristic than small town in social lifestyle that they does not know about their neighbor. In yesteryear, there were advantages and disadvantages to living in elfish community.
I believe there were many benefits to being members of minor. Firstly, citizen had a good social that gave more attention with each other, so they learned their personality. It is also gave impact to reduce many problems. Secondly, they were easier to solve a lot of matter with make a discuss group because they always surrounded by their relatives. However, living in little inhabitants could made a negative attitude an minor.
I think many of the disadvantages were knowledge. Firstly, they only had a little education because limited of person who they know as depend. This is also influence their interpersonal skills that became key to be a success. However, in my view, the biggest problem was that people only had limited friends if they lived in small cluster.
In my opinion, living in majority inhabitants are more disadvantages than minor. The people can improved their ability from other that supported and helped when they wanted to solve the matter and also found several information.
To sum up, I believe that generally every people need other people to help out them from many problems. So we must had a large life social to have a vast knowledge. On the other hand, we need to make sure that we should choose who is a good person for us.
Sentence: Secondly, they were easier to solve a lot of matter with make a discuss group because they always surrounded by their relatives.
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Sentence: However, living in little inhabitants could made a negative attitude an minor.
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Sentence: I think many of the disadvantages were knowledge.
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Sentence: Firstly, they only had a little education because limited of person who they know as depend.
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Sentence: The people can improved their ability from other that supported and helped when they wanted to solve the matter and also found several information.
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Sentence: In yesteryear, there were advantages and disadvantages to living in elfish community.
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