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Are our zoos cruel to wild animal? Discuss.
Zoos are places that often visited by the people for recreation, moreover for the family who has child. They can find many kinds of animal, without going to the wild forest. Zoos can make the visitors happy, but it might not be the same condition as the wild animal's feeling. I trust that zoos are cruel to the faunas.
Numeruous people think that zoos are good for the wild animals. Keeping animals in the zoos can save the animals from extinction than let them free in their habitat. In their wild habitat, the animal might be killed by their enemies. If they live in the zoo, they could not be ...
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The zookeepers usually does not take care of the animals.
The zookeepers usually do not take care of the animals.
They does not give the suitable food for the animals, does not keep the animals clean, and does not give the good treatment for the animals which are getting sick.
They do not give the suitable food for the animals, do not keep the animals clean, and do not give the good treatment for the animals which are getting sick.
Sentence: In addition, they also think that not all of the zoo are cruel to the wild animal because some of them have standart operational procedures how to protect animal in the zoos, for example is Safari Park Zoos, the biggest zoos in Indonesia.
Error: standart Suggestion: standard
Sentence: First of all, zoos are not condusive for wild animal's life.
Error: condusive Suggestion: conducive
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