The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001 - 2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data. (sample)
The bar chart featured in Task 1 shows students attending three different courses over a four year time from 2001 to 2004.
First of all, let's take a look at the data provided in the bar chart over the duration of the four year period. In 2001, 4.3 million students had presumably enrolled course A. In 2002, this figure had increased by nearly 20 percent to 2.5 million. The numbers continued to increase so that by 2003, 3.5 million people were at that time taking course A. Finally, in 2004 the number of student taking course A had increased by another whole million to 4.5 million students.
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