The chart and table below show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980, and 2000, and the world’s top ten of exporters fish in 2000.
The chart and table drawn the number million of fishers in 1970,1980,and 2000, that explain Asia always lead the percentage during three decades at 9, 13, and 24 millions. Africa has percentage at 1.2 millions and at the same rate at 2 millions in 1980 and 2000. South America has interestingly that stable at 1.2 millions during three decades. In North America has some rate with South America but different in 1970 at 0.5 million. The lowest fishers with 0.6 million in 1970 and 2000 and 0.3 million in 1980.
The table show the data of world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000. The chart show the list of countries that Thailand is the highest exporter of fish, and the chart drawn that number one until six respectively rate from three regions, Asia, Europe and America. Taiwan and Russia in the seventh and eighth places and Indonesia and South Korea complete the table in ninth and tenth grade.
In conclusion, during three decades Asia always in the first rank of fishers and Thailand is the country that in the first rank of fish exporters.
Sentence: The table show the data of world's top ten exporters of fish in 2000.
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Sentence: The chart show the list of countries that Thailand is the highest exporter of fish, and the chart drawn that number one until six respectively rate from three regions, Asia, Europe and America.
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Sentence: Taiwan and Russia in the seventh and eighth places and Indonesia and South Korea complete the table in ninth and tenth grade.
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