The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980, and 2000, and the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000.

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The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980, and 2000, and the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000.

These bar chart and table show fishing trade in the world since 1970 until 2000.

The first information is from the chart. This chart shows that Asia was the region with the highest fishers and can be mentioned the largest of the fishers with 9, 13, and 24 million of fishers in 1970, 1980, and 2000. No others region can follow Asia as the biggest source of fish. Africa at the second place only start at the level 1,3 million in 1970 and increase to 2 million at 1980 and no change until 2000. The uniqueness is South Africa which level of at 1,2 million from 1970 to 2000. North America start from 0,5 million in 1970 and level up to 1,2 in both of 1980 and 2000. However, Europe always changed from first with 0,6 million in 1970 hen decrease to 0,3 million in 1980 and back to 0,6 million in 2000.

The second information is from the table which shows the top ten exporters of fish for 2000. In the table, five countries is in the Asia region which Thailand at the first place. Europe and North American just have some countries or minority. From Europe, Norway and Denmark just take the second rate and fifth place.USA and Canada stay at third and sixth place while Russia, Indonesia, and South Korea take the lower place than the other countries in eighth,ninth,and tenth place.

These information show that Asia is the biggest source of fish and can be concluded that Asia has biggest societies than other regions who work as a fisherman.

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