The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The picture introduces three decades (1970-2000) of fishers quantity in millions for five regions, while there was list of ten countries on highest of fish exporters in 2000. In general, Asia has most number of fishermen for 30 years start from 1970 and also the first rank of sending fish out of the country.
At the bar chart, it can be seen that the greatest amount of fishers, 24 millions, was presented by Asia. Africa, as the second position of highest fishers quantity, had significantly different amount of fishermen which was 1-2 millions. On the other side, the lowest quantity of fishers belong to Europe, below 1 million. The number of fishers incread or remained in almost all of the regions or every 10 years except Europe whisch declined in 1980.
The table shows top ten fish exporters in the world in 2000. Te first rank was Thailand and Norway is the second. From America continent, there was USA as the third rank. The last position of top ten is from Asia that is South Korea.
Attractively, te number of fishers in South America remained during 1970 until 2000 that is 1 million people. Asia, Europe, and America the greatest exporter for six rank respectively. Overall, Asia reached the highest amount of fishermen in the world for 1970-2000 and dominated rank of the top ten fish exporters country.
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