The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart describes how many global hybrid vehicles which had been purchased from 2006 to 2009 in certain countries. They were Japan, the United States and other countries selling that transportation.

Generally, the United States was the most country in selling of global hybrid vehicles during 2006 until 2009. However, it was amazing for Japan that it could be the best one in 2009.

Then, we can see the highest selling in 2007 which was done by the United States at 350,000 vehicles. Unfortunately, in 2009, it decreased by 50,000 vehicles. On the other hand, Japan had broken the record in 2009. It totally sold the transportation over 300,000 vehicles. In comparison with previous years, Japan only sold approximately 50,000-100,000 vehicles from 2006 to 2008. Also we can look at the number of vehicles sold by other countries. It was purchased between 2006 and 2009 just under 100,000 vehicles.

In summary, the United States can keep the number of selling the vehicles into the highest level for three years even though it was lost by Japan in the last period.

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