The chart below show information about animal and rainfall at the Nboro Natura Reserve. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below show information about animal and rainfall at the Nboro Natura Reserve.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

According to bar charts, give information about the number of zebras and buffalos, and the amount annual rainfall at the Nboro Nature Reserve every two years between 2005 and 2011.

In 2005, a number of Zebras about fifty and buffaloes were forty. At the same time, the annual rainfall Nboro Nature Reserve report show just over 600 millimetres. During 2005 to 2007, a number of Zebras increased about 20 from about 50 to 70. Buffalos went up twice from 40 to 80 millimetres in 2005-2007. More over 1,000 millimetres Annual rainfall, Nboro Nature Reserve has record.

While the population of zebras fell approximately 5 from 75 to 70, population of buffalos increased 35 from 80 to 115. In the other hand, there were dropped 400 millimetres the annual rainfall report from 110 to 700 millimetres.

Related to the amount of annual rainfall report, population of Zebras and Buffalos had increased again with position 82.5 and 120. Average each annual rainfall rose 875 millimetres 2005 to 2007 and 950 millimetres from 2009 to 2011. However, in other words every 4 years the annual rainfall rose, but it was not significant.

Overall, the number of Zebras and Buffalos, relatively always increased. Absolutely in 2009 a number population of Buffalos was not influence concerning the annual rainfall, but different with Zebras.

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