The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The chart compares six consumer stuffs in four famous nations in Europe: Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
It is clear that Britain lead the most use of customers’ goods. It is also noticeable that three other countries illustrate different requirements of their own people. Germany has fans of photographic film less than the others. For toys lover, Italy is as much as France but they are still by 160 thousand pounds, and Germany stays in the fourth rank. The position of nations for CD consumption is same as photographic film: Britain, France, Italy and Germany from top to down.
Perfumes, tennis racket, and personal stereos get less than 160 thousand pounds in four selected governments. They are the lowest grade in France. After that, the second lowest is Germany. The Italy always gets number two as a country where people consume six types of the tools.
Overall, Britain and Italy occupy the first and second level as European countries which have the biggest number of customers for six goods: photographic movie, toys, DVDs, perfumes, tennis squash and personal stereos.
The chart compares six consumer stuffs in four famous nations
The chart compares six consumer which stuffs in four famous nations
Sentence: It is clear that Britain lead the most use of customers' goods.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 179 200
No. of Characters: 878 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.658 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.905 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.37 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.273 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.35 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.579 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4