The chart below shows the different levels of post school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999

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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The bar below compares the rate of attendants in post-school classes in terms of gender in Australia in 1999. Overall, having a diploma certification as a man has by far the highest percentage among the others.

In the first comparison, there were women who had more tendencies to attend to undergraduate diploma and bachelor's degree according to their male partners. Women as undergraduates had the maximum rate of 70% while men were about half of this rate and approximately 35%. On the second place, there were women's tendencies in Bachelor's degree around 55% where men's rate was a bit more...

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