The chart below shows the estimated sales nationally of silver goods in ‘000s of units for two companies next year. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in silver goods at the end of next year.
Write a report for a university lecturer.
The charts illustrate the expected sales of silver goods in units for two companies and their forecasted market share for the next year.
Firstly, according to the information that the bar chart shows the sales of silver goods in Meteor Products Ltd will possibly fluctuate between 100000 and 300000 during the first three months, after that they will increase until august getting to 500000, remain consistent for 4 months and will hit its peak at the end of the year reaching to almost 600000. The sales of the mentioned goods at Mark Jones Ltd indicates the similar trend, since their sales is e...
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