The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.
The given bar graph elucidates the piece of data regarding the division of household errands by gender in great Britain where these figures are given by minutes per person per day.
It can be Inferred from the graph that men spend 30 minutes of their day time to do cooking,baking and washing-up which is almost a one-third of women;As eves mostly get indulge with these activities. However,males give minuscule time merely 12 minutes in a day for cleansing and house tidying which is very slender comparatively of women's 60 minutes time per day.Further more, there is noticeable abrupt because Adams spend 30 minutes more than women's time when it concern of gardening and pet care.
Nevertheless,lasses get more occupied than males by spending their per day 45 minutes with their infants , although men are very much involved to maintain their odd jobs as compare to women.Apart from that, negligible males do clothes washing,ironing and sewing whereas women spend average 22 minutes of their time.
In crux,It is crystal clear the women spend maximum time in kitchen tasks and least in maintenance of odd jobs whereas men consume their most of time in gardening and pet care but least in clothes washing,ironing and sewing.
Sentence: Further more, there is noticeable abrupt because Adams spend 30 minutes more than women's time when it concern of gardening and pet care.
Description: The fragment Adams spend 30 is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment it concern of is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace concern with verb, past tense
Sentence: Nevertheless,lasses get more occupied than males by spending their per day 45 minutes with their infants , although men are very much involved to maintain their odd jobs as compare to women.Apart from that, negligible males do clothes washing,ironing and sewing whereas women spend average 22 minutes of their time.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and compare
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Avg. Sentence Length: 30.286 21.0
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 212 200
No. of Characters: 1004 1000
No. of Different Words: 120 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.816 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.736 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.33 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.839 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.505 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.781 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4