The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main futures and make comparisons where relevant.
Bar charts are present about comparison between honey-bee colonies and honey productions in United States. As can be seen, comparing both of them start from 1970 to 2010 with duration each ten years.
The number of honey-bee colonies in 1970 is four-millions colonies, increasing exist in 1980, a number of colonies is went up approximately two-hundred thousand compared 10 years before. Since 1980 downfall exist by ten years period to 2010. Fluctuation is found at bar chart of honey production from 1970 to 2010 (by ten years period0.
In 1970, four millions of honey-bee colonies product 130.000 tones honey. Production of honey dropped to 110.000 ton while honey-bee colonies rose in 1980. In 1990, 3,5 million honey-bee colonies product 120.000 tones honey, and then 10 years later, approximately 2,7 honey bee colonies product 100.000 honey, and in the last years at the chart shows about 1,8 honey-bee colonies product 70.000 tones honey.
Over all, the total number of honey-bee colonies determine amount to honey production. As can be seen, more number of honey-bee colonies, more total production of honey. However, bar charts shows degradation was occurred in 1980, honey-bee colonies ware rose but honey productions were down, compared 10 years before.
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Sentence: The number of honey-bee colonies in 1970 is four-millions colonies, increasing exist in 1980, a number of colonies is went up approximately two-hundred thousand compared 10 years before.
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Sentence: Since 1980 downfall exist by ten years period to 2010.
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Sentence: However, bar charts shows degradation was occurred in 1980, honey-bee colonies ware rose but honey productions were down, compared 10 years before.
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