The charts below show information about the number of fish caught and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about fishery affairs in one city in london from 2008 - 2011, named Westhaven. It refers to the number of fish caught as well as the number of fishing boats used.
Numbers of fish caught between 2008 and 2011 generally increased. Tuna caught in 2008 were about 75 thousands, while swordfish was caught approximately 65000. In 2009, both tuna and swordfish were caught about 90 thousands and 95000. The number of swordfish caught rose significantly in 2009 but fell to 70 thousands a year after that. Tuna caught rose constantly until 2011 whereas swordfish fish was fluctuated.
On the other hand, numbers of fishing boats operated in 2008 were 50 boats. After that, in 2009, they rose to 55 and fell to approximately 42. The highest number of boats happened in 2011, 70 on average.
Overall, the number of tuna caught during 4 years increased constantly, while swordfish cought was unpredictible. However, numbers of boats rose the highest number in 2011.
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