Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this
It is indisputably proven that, as we all are aware, being in a educational environment, not only makes a fundamental contribution to child grow up social-minded, but also provide an opt ground for them to have a happy mentality. Psychologists are of the point of view that all the parents must send their child to kindergarten to be educated on account of the fact that behind all successful people is a strong personality, which is related to the things that a person learn in his childhood.
The first merit of being children’s institutions is children will be taught to how communicate with other person, which is very important. These days lots of games are created that most of them have a purpose and beside of entertaining a child, train him/her a wealth of politics and ways. In addition
The other watchable advantage of these educational centers is the focus is only on how to upbringing and training kids and there is no other thing to focus on. As an instance the appearance of them is based on a child’s interest. The colors, paintings and furniture attract children as well as they need a space to play, make noise and run with others in their ages and these activities are not always available at home.
However, there are some demerits. No one can love a kid as his/her parents as well as being aware of a child needs. And parents send their child to kindergarten to be educated but unfortunately sometimes in kindergartens kids are affected by bad attitudes. It seems fair to assume they are too young to comprehend the bad and good behaviors and it leads them to be rude or jealous.
I strongly admit that parents should decide to whether educate their child at home or not. It depends on in what kind of family he/she is growing up for example some families are big and there are lots of kids that can play with each other. Insofar as mothers have enough time to pay attention to their kid, home is a sufficient place for a kid and it is many times more secure.
Sentence: Psychologists are of the point of view that all the parents must send their child to kindergarten to be educated on account of the fact that behind all successful people is a strong personality, which is related to the things that a person learn in his childhood.
Description: The fragment person learn in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace learn with verb, past participle
Sentence: The other watchable advantage of these educational centers is the focus is only on how to upbringing and training kids and there is no other thing to focus on.
Description: two 'is'
Suggestion: centers is the focus which is...
Sentence: I strongly admit that parents should decide to whether educate their child at home or not.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a conjunction, subordinating
Suggestion: Refer to to and whether
Sentence: It is indisputably proven that, as we all are aware, being in a educational environment, not only makes a fundamental contribution to child grow up social-minded, but also provide an opt ground for them to have a happy mentality.
Error: social-minded Suggestion: social minded
Error: indisputably Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The other watchable advantage of these educational centers is the focus is only on how to upbringing and training kids and there is no other thing to focus on.
Error: watchable Suggestion: No alternate word
Pay attention to grammar errors.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1594 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.44 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.66 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 89 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.933 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.636 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5