Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions.
Many children nowadays are facing problems of health and fitness. This is a remarkable phenomenon which happens as a result of bad eating habit, lack of exercises, and too much time spent on the Internet.
First of all, many children enjoy a better quality of life than their parents. They are given more freedom, do not have to work, do heavy tasks, or even daily household chores. As a result, they lead an inactive life, spending time mainly studying, sleeping or doing leisure activities.
Many children do not like doing physical exercises or playing outdoor games. They mostly entertain th...
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