Climate Change
Climate change is impending doom. Every body know the reason, it is because people always used fuel from fossil such as coal, petroleum and natural gas. People know negative impact of climate change, it is like melting polar ice in caps, decrease ocean temperature, drought spread dangerous decrease and flood. The way to stop the negative impact of climate change in the world is save energy, and the method are people must use alternative energy such as solar energy, wind energy and water energy.
Light sun can be used directly to produce electricity or to make a warm or make a cool. There are a lot of methods to harness energy from the light sun. This process are the use of semi- conductor material which can be adapted to release electrons , negatively charged particles that form the basis of electricity, commonly used in water heaters and small electronic such as calculators.
In my opinion wind energy, it is fastest growing energy source in the world. A lot of country used wind power technology, such as Dutch, Japan, and England. This process are Power is transferred through the propeller, sometimes operated at variable speed, and then to the generator and although some avoid turbine gear box with straight run, and all of activity use run computer electronically.
Water energy is not like solar and wind power can generate power continuously for 24 hours each day. Because water always moves naturally store energy very large, if water flowing part of the river or the waves in the ocean. This energy can be harnessed and converted into electricity, and hydroelectric power produced.
Solution to climate change is a clean energy revolution. Because clean energy can be protect our environment. If all of country use alternative energy such as light sun energy, wind power technology, and hydroelectric energy, surely less pollution and threat of accident or catastrophe also.
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in the world is save energy
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Sentence: This process are the use of semi- conductor material which can be adapted to release electrons , negatively charged particles that form the basis of electricity, commonly used in water heaters and small electronic such as calculators.
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Sentence: This process are Power is transferred through the propeller, sometimes operated at variable speed, and then to the generator and although some avoid turbine gear box with straight run, and all of activity use run computer electronically.
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
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