The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The given arrow diagram describes the water cycle above and below the earth.

The chart illustrate the water cycle as a continuous process in three stages such as evaporation of water from the sea, rain fall, and back flow of water to the sea.

In the first stage, due to the heat from the sunrays sea water evaporates which contributes 80% the total water vapor in the air, eventually forming clouds, containing water vapor.

This water results in rain fall,...

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Sentence: The chart illustrate the water cycle as a continuous process in three stages such as evaporation of water from the sea, rain fall, and back flow of water to the sea.
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Sentence: The water penetrate from the surface of the earth also came to the impervious layer.
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