The diagrams below show a number of difference types of bicycle

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The diagrams below show a number of difference types of bicycle

The diagrams give us many information about the different of the bicycles. There are many types of bicycle that we can look at diagrams, such as tandem, mountain bike, racing bike and bicycle rickshaw. Each of bicycle has different shape and function to the others.

Tandem, their bicycle type has 2 seats and 2 sadles, so that way it’s body get longer than others. This bicycle suitable for a couple to go around. Mountain bike has 2 wheels, which the smallest wheels, but has big cogged. This bicycle is suitable for mountain area, like as it’s name. Racing bike, have 2 wheels which is the biggest and slimmest body. It’s suitable for racing which needs more speed. Another bicycle is bicycle rickshaw, that has another seat for passengers behind the driver. It’s has a roof to protect the passengers from the rain or sunlight. This bicycle is suitable for public transportation.

Every bicycle has each shape that shows the bicycles function. If we have a couple, just ride type tandem. If we are going to climb mountain, mountain bike is suitable. For sportsman or bikers who need to join racing competition, racing bike is the choice. On other hand, if it is only to carry passengers, bicycle rickshaw is the right choice.

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so that way it's body get longer than others.
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Racing bike, have 2 wheels which is the biggest and slimmest body.
Racing bike, has 2 wheels which is the biggest and slimmest body.

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