The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future.
Given are the diagrams illustrating the current situation of an undetermined college site and the plan of this area with predicted alterations in the future. It is apparent that there will be some massive changes, especially in terms of the place of entrance, reception and so on.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can easily pinpoint that the entrance will be re-oriented to the opposite side of the edifice which will open to the hall with a reception desk in the centre. The library and toilet which are located next to each other will be replaced to the north-west corner of the building, on the different sides of lunch area. Furthermore, the number of class rooms is anticipated to soar to 5 and will be along the right side of the reception.
Outside the building there will be significant improvements too. The garden near the entrance and foot ware along the left side of the building will be removed.
Overall, it can be seen that the college site will be more well organized in the future than it is now.
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