Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
In 21st century, consumption of unhealthy food is increasing day by day. This can be seen as health problem in many persons like hypertension, heart diseaser, arterial thrombosis, stroke and many more. It is agree that intake of consecutive food cause life threatening broblems. Demand of junk food inclined because of its less cost and busy schedule. I will analyse these points in my essay and solution of it will be discuss after.
Looking firstly at, junk food is inexpensive and encourage people to eat it. For example, person with average salary will eat hamburger of 1 pound cost instead of meal of 6 pounds. As this shows amount of food, letting peopleto to buy it. This makes it clear that due to less cost people prefer it more than other food.
Secondly, due to lack of time person cannot make food,so have fatty food as it can be quickly and easily prepared. For instance, children who stay apart from their parents for study, do not have time to cook , so eat junk food. Due to busy schedule its clear why they take fast food.
There are many ways to solve the intake of unhealthy food like, to aware people about what they eating and how it effect on ones health like obesity ,blood pressure broblem are the commenly seen. On the other hand, government can provide knowledge about replacement of fatty foods with healthy suppliments with in their approach,and government should restrict the unhealthy food by regular food inspections.
Following this look at inexpensive and shortage of time to make food lead in consumption of consecutive food. It has now been shown why people prefer eating fatty foods and what measures can be done to solve it. It is expected that the consumption of fast food is not going to stop.
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Sentence: It is agree that intake of consecutive food cause life threatening broblems.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and agree
Sentence: Due to busy schedule its clear why they take fast food.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to schedule and its
Sentence: On the other hand, government can provide knowledge about replacement of fatty foods with healthy suppliments with in their approach,and government should restrict the unhealthy food by regular food inspections.
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Suggestion: Refer to with and in
Sentence: This can be seen as health problem in many persons like hypertension, heart diseaser, arterial thrombosis, stroke and many more.
Error: diseaser Suggestion: disease
Sentence: It is agree that intake of consecutive food cause life threatening broblems.
Error: broblems Suggestion: problems
Sentence: There are many ways to solve the intake of unhealthy food like, to aware people about what they eating and how it effect on ones health like obesity ,blood pressure broblem are the commenly seen.
Error: commenly Suggestion: commonly
Error: broblem Suggestion: problem
Sentence: On the other hand, government can provide knowledge about replacement of fatty foods with healthy suppliments with in their approach,and government should restrict the unhealthy food by regular food inspections.
Error: suppliments Suggestion: supplements
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Some sentences are not developed smoothly.
Need to improve the language and sentences.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 304 350
No. of Characters: 1393 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.176 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.582 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.397 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.882 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.579 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5