Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

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Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

Nowadays, the globalization is the main reason for the advances that we feel in many life aspects especially in economies. Now we can pay or sell goods from USA or China while you are living in Dubai, we have standard prices everywhere throughout world for the international restaurants meals like KFC and we can transport anything from waste earth to east earth in weeks. However, like anything, we have negative side and impacts for globalization on human lifestyle.

To begin with, globalization has contributed to the world’s economies in many beneficial ways, the advances in science and technology have allowed to businesses to easily cross the boundary lines. Consequently, companies tend to become more proactive and competitive thereby raising the quality of goods, services and world’s living standard. Secondly, globalization have helped to spread the new inventions in any fields of life fields from nation to another nation easily and have opened the door for communities to get new culture and to learn new techniques.

On the other hand, globalization was the reason behind many of bad effects on people. Firstly, globalization have destroyed the original identity for each society and built a one standard type for everything, meals, songs, habits, fashion, arts and more. Secondly, due to the strong transportation system that we have because of globalization, diseases spread become faster, dangerous and more efficient. Therefore, governments have been wasted millions of dollars to improve the health systems to protect people.

In conclusion, everything has advantages points and disadvantages points. Hence, in my opinion, globalization was a smart human idea and we must be proud and thankful. Regarding the globalization side effects, I suggest arranging for global conversation with specialized persons to discuss it’s and came out with acceptable and double solutions for all.

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