Expenditure on fast foods by income groups,UK 1990
The given vertical graph reveals the amount of money spent on junk food by distinct sectors.
It can be clearly seen that,High income sector spent maximum amount of money on Hamburger more than 40 pence followed by Average and Low income groups with more than 30 and about 15 pence.Regarding Fish & Chips,25 pence were consumed by Average income sector.Moreover,High income and Low income were accounted with more than 15 pence equally.
The graph illustrates that,for Pizza, High income group spent three times more money than Low income sector (about 6 pence).What is more,the sectors spent money on fast foods according to their income package.
It is,therefore,clear that Hamburger was most liked by High and Average income group rather than other junk foods whereas Low income group mostly prefered Fish & Chips rather than Hamburger and Pizza.
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Sentence: The graph illustrates that,for Pizza, High income group spent three times more money than Low income sectorabout 6 pence.
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Sentence: It is,therefore, clear that Hamburger was most liked by High and Average income group rather than other junk foods whereas Low income group mostly prefered Fish & Chips rather than Hamburger and Pizza.
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